Blue
Review
Page
Title: |
LunaKittyMeowMix |
Page
Url: |
http://www.fortunecity.com/lavender/judidench/275/lkmm.html |
Nominated
by: |
Fatgirl20 |
LunaKittyMeowMix
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First
Impressions |
First
of all, do not be fooled into thinking that this is the same Meow
Mix that was previously reviewed by my illustrious sister,
Pikurl. The webmaster of LunaKittyMeowMix apparently thought it
prudent to use the name of an already well-established site for
his/her own page. That's pretty lame. That's like calling your
site Sailorgrrl80's Manga Style. Right off the bat, I'm having
bad feelings about this site's integrity. It could also be the
usage of the lame
text on the main page, too. Nittiness aside, the viewer may
choose to go with either Luna or Artemis as a guide. Feeling brave,
my first pick was Luna... |
Going
with Luna |
Again, the
lame text. What is it with wRitinG |iK3 tHIz that seems to impress
the kids so much? Maybe I'm just getting too old. The background
isn't my first choice for an attractive background, but I'm
no art critic. The picture of Ami as Sailormercury with the
two cats is a nice enough composition, but the quality is atrociously
blotchy and deformed. It turns out that the height and width
tags were not properly referenced. Please check the width and
height of the image again, webmaster. Nothing
says amateur more than resizing images with height and width
tags..
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Kitty
Gallery |
Pictures
are just tossed onto an HTML page without any thought given to
layout. One of the images is broken. Nothing great here, and not
that many images; it's just a little collection of all the stuff
from the other pages.
At this point, I just couldn't take much more. The Luna section
of this site is totally compromised of filler for content. I'm
not even going to bother reporting on the individual quizzes,
forms, and so on. I opted to go to the Artemis section instead. |
Going
with Artemis |
Oh,
no! Oh man, it's just the same exact thing, only this time, instead
of Luna pictures, it's Artemis!! I don't get it. This is a totally
useless feature. I mean, if this page actually had some content,
like if it actually told you about the moon kitties' lives, favorite
brand of cat litter, most embarassing hairball memory, etc (hey,
webmaster, take notice, I'm giving you some ideas for expansion
of your page!), then maybe it would be cute to seperate each section
up like this. Luna could be the host for the sections with "educational"
content, and Artemis could host the filler, or the other way around.
The current setup as it is just doesn't do anything or go anywhere. |
Luna's
Kitty Meow Ring |
Oh
boy, the webmaster has a webring! The layout for this page falls
into suite with all of the other pages. |
Final
Thoughts |
I
know right now that I've been extremely harsh with this page.
The fact is, there's just really no purpose to this site. The
name isn't original, the content is nonexistant other than a number
of really token things like a guestbook, polls, and so on. What
good are those things when you have no content to back it up?
The signees of the guestbook seem to share my sentiments, one
signer even commenting politely that this site "could do
with being a little longer [though]." I couldn't agree more.
I really can't foresee any more areas in Sailormoon that are in
need of coverage, but one thing's for sure: the cats of the moon
are already in good hands. This site just isn't the one doing
the holding. |
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