Red
Review
| Haruka
to Michiru Ten to Kaiyo no Jinja |
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| First
Impressions |
| Simple,
and inviting layout. A little slow loading. Effort put into this
one. |
| Main
Page |
| This
page has a nice, although long, index page. There is a fairly
long picture of Neptune and Uranus in the middle of the page, and
to each senshi's direction, a list of the contents pertaining to
her. Nice graphics, but I suggest trying to decrease the size of
the senshi from 98 KB to something a little quicker loading. After
we get past the legs of the senshi there is more on the index: the
greeting! It's a little strange to have the greeting of the page
so far below everything, so I suggest finding a way to put the text
up higher, and also to make it a little smaller. Following the
greeting are buttons that may look a little confusing to some
visitors. Maybe explaining what they are would help some. =-]
We also find the common SMWPR Fragment as well as other cluttered
items. |
| Michiru
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This is a
section on Michiru (the girls, and their senshi forms are in
different sections). The usual stuff here...
Michiru's
Manga Gallery
The background on this page is pretty, but some of the text
overlaps the image of Michiru, making it hard to read.
This section is divided into color and black and white
images. Very nice pictures, some I've already seen, some
I haven't. Good quality on most of them.
Michiru's
Anime Gallery
One note on the background: this is an anime gallery, but the
picture in the background is of manga. Oh, and as for text
overlapping the background, it goes the same for this page. There
are a lot more images in this gallery! But I've pretty much seen
them all already.
Information
The table layout is a bit confusing on this page. Try making it all
a little less cluttered. Usual statistics found here. Interesting facts
on Michiru. A nice little note about Michiru's attitude is included.
It says "More to come!" at the bottom, which I'm always glad to see.
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| Sailor
Neptune |
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As I stated
earlier, this page separates the girls from their senshi selves.
This section is on Sailorneptune.
Sailor
Neptune's Manga Gallery
Same division between color and black and white images, as well
as text overlapping background. Some interesting pictures in this
section! I especially liked the black and white "Chibi Neptune" image.
=-]
Sailor
Neptune's Anime Gallery
Various anime images can be found here. I've seen most of them, and
a lot of them are screensnaps.
Information
Picture and explanation of Neptune's henshin pen. She also lists
and has pictures of Neptune's attacks, one of which is the manga's
Violin Tide! =-D More interesting, yet generally known, facts listed
here also. Some information on the planet Neptune, as well as its
zodiac symbolism.
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| Haruka
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A section on
Haruka!
Haruka's
Manga Gallery
Again, we find a nice background, but text overlapping it.
I really do suggest putting the text in a table, to get it
from overlapping the background image. Anyway, on to the
images: divided into color and black and white images as well.
We have some very nice, very cute, images here! I recommend this
gallery for any Haruka fan! =-]
Haruka's
Anime Gallery
More screensnaps! Although not all of them are...anyway, be careful
because I'm almost certain that 3_omake.jpg may very well be an image
of Motoki from Sailor Stars.
Information
More stats. More interesting facts. The background in this page
suits Haruka well, but may make the text a little hard to see for some.
My suggestion would be to lighten it up a bit.
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| Sailor
Uranus |
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Finally, the
Sailoruranus section!
Sailor
Uranus's Manga Gallery
There's that conflicting background/text sequence again! Aside from
that, these are some pretty interesting scans.
Sailor
Uranus's Anime Gallery
The layout for this gallery is OK...but now the side-scroll bar at
the bottom of the browser appears, and the text scrolls off of my
800 x 600 resolution. On top of that, none of the images were found
on the server, but that could've been Geocities' fault, so I'm just
going to skip this section...
Information
Like on Neptune's information page, this contains a picture of the henshin
pen, as well as pictures and names of the attacks used by Uranus, including
her manga attack. More facts, and information on the planet as well
as zodiac meaning is put into this section. NOTE-- This page took a LONG time
to load! Try getting rid of the animated GIF, and reducing image sizes...
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| Lover's
Gallery and Information Page
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More
galleries!! Aarrgghh!!
Anime
Gallery
Basically, A LOT of anime pictures of the couple
together.
Manga
Gallery
Another "404 File Not Found" page...
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| Educational
Links
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A section
divided into pages each providing their own links to Japanese
Language Help, Planetary Help, and Astrological Help pages.
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| Links and
Rings!
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Pretty
self-explanatory...
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| Link to
Us!, Awards, and Contact Us!
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The
general things usually located on a website...
Link
to Us!
Basically, a collection of the buttons and banners you can use
to link to this website with.
Awards
The infamous awards page...they've won one award so far. I'm not saying
Nobel Prize material, but this page does deserve an award or two.
Contact Us!
A little strange section we have here...it's the page on how to contact her!
But that's not all...also posted are the poems the two senshi have written
about each other. =-]
| Final
Thoughts |
| This
is overall a pretty nice website. I can see it getting lots of attention
in the future...just add more things, straighten out your HTML codes, and de-
clutter a lot of the things and you'll be set! I hope to see more information
soon. One more note-- I suggest fixing those overlapping background/text
schemes, as well as moving the poetry to either its own page, or to the Lover's
Section. |
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did Benjamin Franklin say when he discovered electricity?
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